As i said the problem i found was that the phrase 'DRNK&DRGS' wasnt enough on it's own, as it sort of fell short during the crit, it needed something more, just something else to put into the context of informing my audience how to be a proper guest at a party! What is my message; be a proper party guest, get drunk and take drugs! so, what i did was do my best to say this, but keeping this high street fashion style!
I think this is the better of the two, bit more stylish and neat, finished of with the slanted boxes, in the style of Gio-Goi, Beck and Hersey. Furthermore, with the added 'get' and 'take' and what i will make into a logo or brand name, 'proper party guest' its out into a stronger sense of the context i am aiming for, however it is not yet fully there! This whether it be a t shirt or a poster needs something to go with it, something to really define what the message is answering to! More work then yeah...
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