From here i went to produce mock versions of what a page may look like on the different areas of research...

The outcome from this was i thought successful, bit lovely!
First day back we were given a new deadline which was to create a 32 page bound book by the following monday, so i had to get my jog on...
It was around this time where the first group crit took place and we were to show our research etc
The crit overall was really helpful and fairly positive, the main problems or concerns were that what the market should be, whether it be to enthusiastic snowboarders who already know the sport or aimed at people that might not know a lot about it but are intrigued to get involved.
There was also comments made that the book of 100 boards would lack original personal images and with a book being mostly type could get boring.
so, i need illustrations, i need to choose a content which allows me to create images for.
After some thought i decided to go with a book of 100 snowboarding tricks, the market being anything from pro, recreational and brand new riders!
The plan is to have mostly text but with illustrations depicting the trick mentioned.

monday 7:30 am, 12 hour slog from sunday evening, excellent.

Crit time again, Again i found it very useful, firstly i got some decent constructive criticism and its helpful to see what other people had and can produce in this amount of time.
The main points that came up about the book were;
Negative
. Lack of illustrations
. A bit 'samey'
. The Process i took making the book
. becomes dull due to similar pages
Positive
. Interesting subject/matter
. Illustrations made work well
. Genious trick names
Looking back at this i did a little brainstorm thing and decided what to concentrate on and figure out where to take this, the main things i've now started to work on are, producing illustrations for each of the trick category's, Grabs, jibbs, Spins etc
If there's a way of involving board designs as comments were made in both crits that the graphics of snowboards are highly designed and interesting.
Working with adding several colours and fonts.
Also and quite importantly move onto printing the book properly using indesign duplex and binding etc! hello friday print drop in,
byebye for now
1 comment:
Didn't get to see your book in class, and didn't notice this post til after I'd commented on the one after it.
Really like the colours and the layout of this, it would be great to see this incorporated with the more graffiti elements.
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